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Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
Since the Phone be used gunually .pelpeo even crossing the street use Phone . These thing is very dange . It can destroy the treafit sistient .It will suffer you life .
In my opinion ,first ,we can make a rude to fobid the pelpeo doing this .We can tittle some place using the phone ,and we must obey the rude .
Genually if everyone crossing road do not play with the Phone that would make everying good .

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
范文
increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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