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Cross the street while playing with the phone
Nowdays,more and more people use the phone. The phote let our life become wonderful. But,playing the phone is dangerous when they are crossing the stress.
There are some harmful things for people who play the phone when they cross the street.On one hand,whlie you are playing the phone,you pay your attention in it.You may not care about the car in the street.It is more dangerou than you don't play the phone.On the other hand,playing the phone in the street,also make the driver in trouble.Beacause you are playing the phone in the street,the driver wlii be care about you.
I think we don't play the phone in the street.

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
范文
increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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