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Crossing the Street While Playing With the Phone
From the Phone we can derive please companionship ,the phone may absorb our attention ,so completely for the time bing the forget our surrounding ang even our identity.the phone will help us when nothing else can ,the possibilitis of our literart experiences are almost unlimited.the enjoymeng of the music , the phonein our hangs we need never be lonely ,when human frends desert us,but,use the phone in road is very in daning,so we should tell the pople,the road have very car .

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
范文
increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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