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Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
We often can see the people crossing the street while playing with the phone now.It is too danger . In the steet,that is so many car ,and the car drive very quickly . You crossing the street with your son or daugter, When you pay attention to the phone,your son or dangter may run out. There are more and more people die by the car while playing with the phone to cross the street .
We could tell to the dangers and hazards everyboby ,if crossing the street while playing with the phone .Then,we can make the people crossing the street while playing with the phone to newspaper.that can realize his mistake who playing with the phone to cross the street.And we can be denounced the people who playing with while playing with the phone to cross the street.

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
范文
increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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