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My View on Video Game
With the help of the fastest development technology of computers and internect, people can do a lot of benefit things such as searching news or listening to the music. However, the children have more chances to play video game from the computer, and there are more and more children are play acidtied in video game.
In many times, on the one hand, the video games are bad for the children's physicial. Most of the video games need the players to beat or kill 'someone' to finish the mission, so some children think beating or killing people is common things and they will do this things in the real world. On the orther hands, play video games can also bad for children's body. Most of the children who play video games long time will have less time to do exercise and lead to their body being week.
As we know the problems, I suggest that the parents should spend more times to talk to their kids and take them to outside to do exercise in order to let the children know the woderful of the real world.

[460649]My View on Video Games
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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "My View on Video Games". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在很多孩子沉迷电子游戏;
2. 这对孩子的身体和心理都有影响;
3. 如何解决这个问题。
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vedio games, popular among students, addict to, bad influenc on health and psychology, violent games, harmful to children both physically and mentally, undesiralbe consequences, distinguish good or bad vedio games, limit screen time
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