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My View on Video Games
Nowadays,it is a socilty full of electricity products,like mobile phone,computer,mini pad etc.,most children have been affected by it,they always play video games with it for a long time without rest, it is bad for their eyesights and phsycial, to solve this situation is depend on the parents.
My opinion is that parents should get more time to stay with their children, to take part in more activities together with their children, no matter how busy their work, parents should leave one day to stay with their children every week, in this way, children would find there are more intrested things than vdeo games, thire attention would not only in the electricty products, so stay with your children more as you can, and not just leave them with a mini pad, all parents should try their best to give chlidren a happy childhood.

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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "My View on Video Games". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在很多孩子沉迷电子游戏;
2. 这对孩子的身体和心理都有影响;
3. 如何解决这个问题。
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vedio games, popular among students, addict to, bad influenc on health and psychology, violent games, harmful to children both physically and mentally, undesiralbe consequences, distinguish good or bad vedio games, limit screen time
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