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Now more and more people crossing the street while playing with the phone.
It is so bad for them. for example, It would tale more lower looking on our eyes. secend,we would catch a accidene in a high persons then others. third, the ralatinship would be go bad with your classmate, frends, or your mather,father.
I was depressed as well as confused to corssing the street while playing with the phone.
so we could take more atentions to the people when they go crossing the street with you. another way thinkng somthing about intreseting things, or ,looking the way and help some people who needed you.
From now on we don't play with the phone everytime that would be feel alringt.

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
范文
increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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