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Crossing the Stree Whille Playing with the Phone
With the dovelopment of technology ,more and more people use phone as their contacting tool.It is easy for us to find that many people play phone whatever in home ,public place ,school,even crossing the stree.which is very in danger.The danger as following .
First and foremore,we should not pay more attention in the traffic condition when we play with the phone ,which will cause traffic acidient.Scendly,we will bring some troubles to others,such as lating for job.Finally, we may break the rules while playing with the phone in crossing the street.
In order to stop this phenomenon taking place again ,some measures should make for it.Firstly,the goverment should make the rules for playing with the phone while crossing the street.Scendly,we should not play with the phone when cross the street.

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
范文
increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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