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What is Real Beauty
When asked about the beauty of people ,there are different apoit whit that .Many of people believe that the person own a beautiful pace is important.as the actor of Lin zhiling own a likely angel face as well as taller .
Howerer,others claim that it is more importance for a person has a nice inner .For example ,a person who the face is not so good looking,but he offen help peaple when they have trable.Besides,he get long with another peaple very well as a result of we all admire him.
as far as i am concerned.I plefer to the later.I think a person who have a nice inner is so beauti.Even if a beautiful face you own,when you are old ,the face also will become not beautiful .In conclusion,own a nice inner is a real beauty.

[460912]What is Real Beauty?
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 You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "What is Real Beauty". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 很多人认为外表美重要;
2. 有人说心灵美重要;
3. 你的看法。
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beauty of appearance,different attitudes to beauty, inner beauty, morality, Lei Feng , example, model of beauty, spirit, the beauty lying in one's heart , embodied in actions and deeds
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