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Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
As the world change,more and more people has a phone,they play the phone everywhere,expecially play during crossing the street,it is very dangerous.
First of all,you can't attention the car,it increase the danger that cars will crash you.Second,the theif will have chance and take your phone easily,becase your attention will down while you playing the phone.Thirdly,it will make your neak feel tird.
As far as I am concert,we must improve the sense of security,don't play the phone while crossing the street,becase the life is improtant than playing phone.

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
范文
increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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