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My View on Video Games
Taday,so many childrends like play the video game . They are after school don't
go to studed and do the home work,only play the video game.For the long time ,the
childrens will have bad baby.But I look they don't have the mind.
Sometime parents must tell the chirdrend don't more paly video game,and with
they go to shopping eles. On the sometime chirdrend was play the Pin Pen with classmate.
And then ,will by bike on the weekend.
Time is very important in ous lives,tell this for the childrend, don't often want to play
the video games.Everytime have mort something to do.

[460649]My View on Video Games
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "My View on Video Games". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在很多孩子沉迷电子游戏;
2. 这对孩子的身体和心理都有影响;
3. 如何解决这个问题。
范文
vedio games, popular among students, addict to, bad influenc on health and psychology, violent games, harmful to children both physically and mentally, undesiralbe consequences, distinguish good or bad vedio games, limit screen time
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