当前位置: 我的作文 ->
编号:536
成绩:
评语:

正文
My View on Video Games
Now more and more people enjoy playing computer's games and video games that may their parents very worried ahout it.
I think it is not good for childrens to play video games all their's free time.Childrens don't want to go to school to have a cless when their additied to playing the video games. And then their's mark will down at once. It is very badly for their's mentally and physicially.So the teachers should tell their's students it's not good for them to play the video games and their's parents should stop their's childrens playing video games

[460649]My View on Video Games
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "My View on Video Games". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在很多孩子沉迷电子游戏;
2. 这对孩子的身体和心理都有影响;
3. 如何解决这个问题。
范文
vedio games, popular among students, addict to, bad influenc on health and psychology, violent games, harmful to children both physically and mentally, undesiralbe consequences, distinguish good or bad vedio games, limit screen time
满分:15;字数:1,117

from_id:F20150521170136165