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Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone Today,crossinging the street while piaying with the phone is more than all. Actually,the young people had a bad habby.The had a lot of disadvances. For exemple, Firstly,they're not to seen the low, the will be had terrible. Secondly,palying the telephone was bad on my i. down low on the town. Therefor,our government should made some ideas to decloved it. We can teaching the young childer doesn't played the phone .And people should asking heatly knowledges to young people.

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
范文
increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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