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What is Real Beauty?
What is Real Beauty?, is an eternal theme in literature.Probably different people has differerent answer.Some believe that the outer beauty is important in our life,because it can make us more confidence and leave other a better impression. So they think that the outer beauty is the real beauty.
However,some think that the inner beauty is the real beauty,because it can't be changed when the times going .In addition,the inner beauty is behaves of the ability
in work or study,the characteristics toward the life ect.Thus,the inner beauty can attracts us to know the answer of the real beauty.
In my opion,I like the inner beauty is the real beauty,with the following reasons.Firstly,the inner beauty can obtain with your efforts when you hard-working and strength your ability by take actions into learning and practising.Secondly, it can lasted the long time.Thus,I prefer the inner beauty.
In short,the standard of the real beauty is key to the thinking of people.As a saying goes,a cion has two sides,no matter the inner beauty or the outer beauty has their attractive,that will become someone's real beauty.

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 You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "What is Real Beauty". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 很多人认为外表美重要;
2. 有人说心灵美重要;
3. 你的看法。
范文
beauty of appearance,different attitudes to beauty, inner beauty, morality, Lei Feng , example, model of beauty, spirit, the beauty lying in one's heart , embodied in actions and deeds
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