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As we all knew ,the development of our city ,More and more pelope like playing phone when their crossing the shreet .
For one sice ,crossing the street while playing with the phong an able to very terrible with our life .For the other sice ,we donot attention to street when we playing games closs the shreet.
As for as my thing ,we should put down some size to remenble crossing the street people.And we can give some good idea throuth newspaper.
I hope more and more people can attention to the cars when we crossing the street. And not playing games when seeing street .

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
范文
increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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