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Early Rising
Nowadays,people early rising is more and more few.As the modern of the depent, people feel so tired.Everyday they must wate up in the afternoon when they not work and not study.Why not they early rising?
The reason is that people has a not health habit with they haven't goodsleep.Many people like play movephone while they wanna sleep.It has many good or bad massage let people feel extice or afraid.so they has not quickly in the dream land.What is more, people is not make good broke in the work.As is known,nowadays many people not only day must do they best to the work,but also they should not make worse.The work is so difficult and boring. Moreover,people few keep sport in someday.
In my view,I think people at night want sleep don't playing telephone,turn off the telephone.Expect the work,people can do sport in some time,you can run,play basketball, football and so on.Everyday early rising in 7 c'clock,and keep this good habbit,
it will let you ealy rising.

[460910]Early Rising
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Early Rising". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 早起的人越来越少了;
2. 造成这种现象的原因有哪些;
3. 人们应该怎么做。
范文
less and less people rise early, go to bed late, overwork, unhealthy life styles, early rise keep people fit, plan a day's work, good biginning of a day, get rid of bad habits, cultivate the habits of early rising
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