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Early Rising

It is a conmon habit that the people can't help but waking in the morning.In other word,more and more people can't out of the bed.Not only is it not a benebit to our body health,but also work as well as family of us.On the one hand,there is no doubt that we would be late for the work. On the other hand,the more sleeping,the more chance that we will lose time get on well with our family.
It is why the bad habit is exsit to everybody.As far as I am concerned,for one thing,it is a great stress that the current people have it,whatever it is from the study or work.For another,the contemporary people have to do the work,it is too busy to have less time for the sleep.
Last but not least,for the sake of changing the bad habit,we had better do something for this.Firstly,the more activity we have ,the more health we could be.Secondly,we would have the more time to sleep if we can improve our capacity of our work.Finally,not only can we awake early,but also go to bed early. Considering all mentioned above,the sleeping of us plays a great role on everybody daily life,the function of its is without a parallel in the world.

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要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Early Rising". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 早起的人越来越少了;
2. 造成这种现象的原因有哪些;
3. 人们应该怎么做。
范文
less and less people rise early, go to bed late, overwork, unhealthy life styles, early rise keep people fit, plan a day's work, good biginning of a day, get rid of bad habits, cultivate the habits of early rising
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