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My view on Video Game
Now ,a lot of young children on Video Games,they fail at the Video games.This is
unhealth for the young children.
I have some advice:First,young children's daddy and mummy don't play Video Games,

The second:Young children don't touch computer and telephone in family or in school;The
third:All teacher's and all paient's told all young children that the Video Games is unhelth for
our,Video Games is kill our eyes and it kill our health.
So,I advice all young children's don't touch Video Games forever.I believe all
young children don't touch Video Games in the future.

[460649]My View on Video Games
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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "My View on Video Games". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在很多孩子沉迷电子游戏;
2. 这对孩子的身体和心理都有影响;
3. 如何解决这个问题。
范文
vedio games, popular among students, addict to, bad influenc on health and psychology, violent games, harmful to children both physically and mentally, undesiralbe consequences, distinguish good or bad vedio games, limit screen time
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