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Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
In nowadays we can see many people crossing the stree while playing with the phone expecually teenagers, It is dangerous ! first it is bad for our eyesight second it also easy make some traffic accidents, finally it is bad hobbit for us!
In my appionion we should refuse these bad hobbits and try our best not playing the phone while crossing the stree.we should know that in public place we should thing about outhers not only yourself !

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
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increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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