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my view on video games
many children very like play the video games in now. use anytume go to playing,forget sleep and eat but remember playing the video.every unhappy.so,i intesive the people maybe gowith chidren talking about,with thery play the game.Go to travel,let to children make a
surpair and happytime.with him go running and see the tv at home.mamytime stay with chlid.
let him mow have a mamy something can to do.hope children have happyday everyday.let
children smile in the face.

[460649]My View on Video Games
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "My View on Video Games". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在很多孩子沉迷电子游戏;
2. 这对孩子的身体和心理都有影响;
3. 如何解决这个问题。
范文
vedio games, popular among students, addict to, bad influenc on health and psychology, violent games, harmful to children both physically and mentally, undesiralbe consequences, distinguish good or bad vedio games, limit screen time
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