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With the developmen of our sosie,many people have their own phone.So it is a comon thing that ther use it on the road.some people is looking the news by the phone .Some people are communicating with others .And so on.
However,it is dangerouse that you cross ther street while playing whith the phone.There are many cars on the road,so you are easier to suffer the car thing .And you will lose your mony if you crosse the street while play with the phone .And mang other thing will hanppen.
So now we must learn to put down your phone .we must know our life is very impotent.And crossing on the street we only becom careful while not playing with the phone.

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
范文
increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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