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My View on Video Games

With the rapid development of society. The game for children not only playing outside but also playing video game at home.There is a question that many a children has lose themselves in video game. It make them cann't study in mind and have interesting in other things.It will has bad affect on both the physical and mental of children The most important thing is that how can we improve this phenomenon.In my opinpion.Firstly.It is important for parent talk with their children about the bad of video games. Secondly.The parent can take more time play with them and made them didn't feel alone again.I believe that if you did the idea above ,you can change you kid.

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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "My View on Video Games". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在很多孩子沉迷电子游戏;
2. 这对孩子的身体和心理都有影响;
3. 如何解决这个问题。
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vedio games, popular among students, addict to, bad influenc on health and psychology, violent games, harmful to children both physically and mentally, undesiralbe consequences, distinguish good or bad vedio games, limit screen time
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