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It is Video Games that more an more inportant our life. But,we are play a Games not our health .Not only not ourselfe working,but also more an more inportant not our hearlth.Tt is known to us aii that on Video Games try kid is very not heslth . The reason why is kiders learning not good is that paly a games.My borther was paly a games taht he is learning is very bed . What I want to say is that we are not paly a games,what I suggest is that we are to achieve success,we are hard learning ,we are not paly games. Reading the story , we are not paly a games. To achieve success ,we are very hard learning.only in this way can bounlding rearlth and very good learning.So.we are not paly a games .

[460649]My View on Video Games
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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "My View on Video Games". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在很多孩子沉迷电子游戏;
2. 这对孩子的身体和心理都有影响;
3. 如何解决这个问题。
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vedio games, popular among students, addict to, bad influenc on health and psychology, violent games, harmful to children both physically and mentally, undesiralbe consequences, distinguish good or bad vedio games, limit screen time
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