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Crossing the street While Playing with the Phone
Today, many people play the phone when crossing the street. but, they do not thing the way is very danger, because many car and people on the street, so that easy to hapen the accident.In some time,the way is very inspile. For example,when across a friend ,we can not see he or she,it will make unhappy for us.
So we must deal with the problem,when we crossing the street,we can not play the phone,in the same time,we must see the road,only in this way can we far from the danger and have a happy life.
Now,let us begin to far from the phone when on the street,make the happy life for us

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
范文
increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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