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As the technology has been developing rapidly these day.Everyone have one cellpone,which cause they cross the street while play with the pone.This phenomenon occur frequently.
It is dangerous that we play the phone when cross the street.You will ignore the traffic light and react slowly when the car is coming,which will cause accident.You injure or the others injure,even if you will die .Also,the teenagers can learn to your behaviour and make the same dangerous mistake.
In my opinions,firstly,we should stop immediately the people who play the phone when cross the street.Secondly,we should tell the young don't do it.

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
范文
increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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