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Crossing the street while playing with the phone
Nowadays,The Phenomenon about crossing the street while playing with the phone offen happen.It is detrimental for those who crossing the street while playing with the phone .This behavior will produce harmful effect.On one hand,there will have traffic acident on their body.On the other hand, Phone also is destroy ,what's worse ,if our body is demaged,we will be sent to hospitle.Therefore,our parent also will very concern about me.wo should
In my view,To solve this problme,people should not playing with the phone while crossing the street,the best way not to bring phone while crossing the street.In addition,people should obey the traffic rule.Only in this way can we concentrate on crossing the steet.As a saying gose,"Live only a opportunity to live".We should improving our sense of valuing our live.

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
范文
increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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