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Crossing the Street While Play with the Phone

Nowdays,there are many of people have a bad hobbit that they are crossing the street while play with phone.Why?One hand you may think that it is a little thing .But ,it is very not safe.My be there is a traffic accident on you if you do not look at the traffic light. the other hand it damages your eyes when you are crossing the stree while playing with the phone.Finally,your bag and important thing may be stoled.
In my opinion,we should not play with the phone while crossing the stree.we could have a look the view or the other people instead of playing phone.

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
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increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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