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In fact, when people crossing the street ,we can see so many peoples are playing the mobile phone, their did not care street satuation and traffic light senions,that why there are so many traffic accident occured every day,suggest to sovuite the problem by while see the people crossing the street while their play the mobile phone didete the points same like the driver

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
范文
increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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