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My View on Video Games
nowadate, many children likes Video Game everydate. It makes their body hurly .
In my view,on the one hand parent should taked care children,make they likes orther things, such as reading .sing. If they likes it ,they will get dood life .On the orther hand make
they plaing when they finish the homework but plaing less a 30 meniues. they hapyy with the
games and miss he have to do ottherthing. we shou make children to do they likes thing . they
fun for games

[460649]My View on Video Games
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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "My View on Video Games". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在很多孩子沉迷电子游戏;
2. 这对孩子的身体和心理都有影响;
3. 如何解决这个问题。
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vedio games, popular among students, addict to, bad influenc on health and psychology, violent games, harmful to children both physically and mentally, undesiralbe consequences, distinguish good or bad vedio games, limit screen time
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