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My view on video game
it comes up to the the children like to play video games.i believe that is very harmful to the children.However,it is two ways to let children don't like the view game.
one reasons is that children should take many lesson that their like.They will enjoy the lesson when they haveing the lesson.The others is that the children have many activities.such as play table tennes,so they will has litter time to do other things.
To sum up,we need to find many thing that the children like,they will have many times to the oother things.so they hav

[460649]My View on Video Games
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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "My View on Video Games". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在很多孩子沉迷电子游戏;
2. 这对孩子的身体和心理都有影响;
3. 如何解决这个问题。
范文
vedio games, popular among students, addict to, bad influenc on health and psychology, violent games, harmful to children both physically and mentally, undesiralbe consequences, distinguish good or bad vedio games, limit screen time
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