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My View on Video Games
Nowadays, the majority of chirldrens are like to play the video games more than to do anything.This is not a good thing for the chirldren,because it will make the chirldren bad for their body and their mind.I believed many parents couldn't like to see that.So,how to changed it ?
Firstly,the time for tchirldren to play the video games should be limited.It can make the chirldren have more time to do otherthings.Secondly,parents should make the chirldren to know what is the predominant thing and they will suffer the bad thing from play video games,such as,they will ill by they like video games more than sport.Finally,study can absorb the chirldren'sattention so completely for the time being that they forget their sorroundings.And it can delight parents.

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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "My View on Video Games". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在很多孩子沉迷电子游戏;
2. 这对孩子的身体和心理都有影响;
3. 如何解决这个问题。
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vedio games, popular among students, addict to, bad influenc on health and psychology, violent games, harmful to children both physically and mentally, undesiralbe consequences, distinguish good or bad vedio games, limit screen time
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