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my view on video games
Nowadays ,vast majority children are addicted in playing video games .To begin with, with the economy development ,parents are concernted on working,and pay less attention to theironlychilden.
As is commonly known,it can effect study and let them lose the sense of live .further more ,palying video games do harm to their health .for instance ,when palying video games ,it make them stay latter to go to bed, due to theri eyes swollen and their face sees pale.
In my opinion ,parents should take strick educated to their children,give the correct education to them .last but not least , pay more attention to them. if only through this measure, their life will become more and more fruitfull.

[460649]My View on Video Games
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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "My View on Video Games". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在很多孩子沉迷电子游戏;
2. 这对孩子的身体和心理都有影响;
3. 如何解决这个问题。
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vedio games, popular among students, addict to, bad influenc on health and psychology, violent games, harmful to children both physically and mentally, undesiralbe consequences, distinguish good or bad vedio games, limit screen time
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