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my view on video games
In a society viden games is communt in our daily life. Nowday,most of childrens had computer in their home.They alway use of the computer to play the video games.
Many chlidrens wast more time to play video games will make them have healty isuss. Play more time will become not go out to the home and no friend .The children lonely in their home and their body is more and more not healty and make their hear in effert .
As for me ,I think the parent can teach them how to applying the time to do something.Use the computer to check different of knowlage . Or to go with the children to travl place,see the popular place. Take them to visit the other people and children paly.

[460649]My View on Video Games
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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "My View on Video Games". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在很多孩子沉迷电子游戏;
2. 这对孩子的身体和心理都有影响;
3. 如何解决这个问题。
范文
vedio games, popular among students, addict to, bad influenc on health and psychology, violent games, harmful to children both physically and mentally, undesiralbe consequences, distinguish good or bad vedio games, limit screen time
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