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Now , some people have a phone . Phone is so improtant to our life . But , in the street , some people like crossing the street while playing with the phone . It's a bad hobile ! They don't know this way have so much trouble with everyone , for themsevle or the other one . On the one hand, they playing with the phone , they must haven't communication in crossing the street , it's so dangous for themsevle ! On the other hand , for the drvier , it's unfair !When the drvier is drving in the street , but have a man crossing the street ,you know is how so afaire !
Crossing the street while playing with the phone is so bad ! We mustn't do it ! I think the traffice rule can add this one . For expmle ,when you crossing the street while playing with the phone , if have a traffice assident , the reflunt is belond with yourself !Bay the way ,it's important with yourself!

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
范文
increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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