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Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
Do you know what is importance to people.The answer must be "The Phone".Everyboby has the phone and can't stay without the phone.The phone becames the important part in our life.We play the phone on bed,at work,or stand or walk.And now people cross the street while playing with the phone.
I think that cross the street while playing with the phone is so bad for the safe.It leads to more traffic accidents.Beacause you are playing the phone,you will lost the "Green"and cross the street while the "Red". You can't notice the car,bus .You can't listen to the voise of the car.
We should say "no" to cross the street while playing with the phone.And we should tell our friends not to do that.The gaverment can built the role to make people not to do it.

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
范文
increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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