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My View on Video Game
Now a day , more and more chindren would like to saty at home and play Video Game rather than go out to do some sports . As far as I am concerned , It is bad for their body and psychology . Some of them even run back home to play the game at once when they class over . It makes them less contect with other students .
In my opinion , our parient should try their best to break that bad habit of playing Video Game . For example , doing some exercises with them after school , also you can go hiking with them too . So let us try to prevent our childrent from Video Game .

[460649]My View on Video Games
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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "My View on Video Games". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在很多孩子沉迷电子游戏;
2. 这对孩子的身体和心理都有影响;
3. 如何解决这个问题。
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vedio games, popular among students, addict to, bad influenc on health and psychology, violent games, harmful to children both physically and mentally, undesiralbe consequences, distinguish good or bad vedio games, limit screen time
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