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Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
Today , more and more people have phone . They like to play with the phone . We are also know it's no right to cross to the street while playing with the phone . However , some people do it while they know it .
Why don't we cross to the street while playing with the phone? Becouse it's very dangerous . Frist , we don't know what's up in front of up . What's more ? It's bad for our eyes .
What should we do for this problem ? At frist , we should put the phone in the bag . When we put the phone in the bag , we isn't easy to play our phone . Of couse , school should teach students how to right to use their phone .

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
范文
increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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