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What is Real Beauty?
How do you think about the real beauty? Nowadays,different people have different views about the real beauty.On the one hand,many people think it is very importent to keep the beauty by our body.On the other hand, some people think the real beauty is building on our heart. And they think the kindness of people is the real beauty in the world.
As far as i am concerned, i think we should keep the balance betweeen them. First, we should make our body beauty and have a good soul in our daily life. Second, we should make us better and help others who need to help. And we can konw more about "the real beauty" form the books.
The most importent thing is, we would have a good time to understand "the real beauty" by ourselves. We should try our best to make us better and enjoy our life form the rael beauty.

[460912]What is Real Beauty?
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 You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "What is Real Beauty". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 很多人认为外表美重要;
2. 有人说心灵美重要;
3. 你的看法。
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beauty of appearance,different attitudes to beauty, inner beauty, morality, Lei Feng , example, model of beauty, spirit, the beauty lying in one's heart , embodied in actions and deeds
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