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What is Real Beauty
A lot of people think that the real beauty is the beauty of the face and the figure.The reason is that lots of people will see one's face when he see your firstly.And then,if you look beautiful,the person will kind with you in the first time.Or if you look not good,the person will
stict with you in the first time.
However,someone said that the real beauty is the beauty of the heart.Heart is the most beautiful is that you will have many real friends in the future.But having less friends if you only have a nice look.Morewhile,you will award more happiness in your future life.At the end of the time,you will have a colorful life .
In my opinion,i think that the real beauty is the beauty of the heart.Beacuse i can live a happiness life if i have a good heart,So,i will often kind with others.Secondly,i will help people who in troubie every day.Endly,i will do more awarding activities in the future.

[460912]What is Real Beauty?
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 You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "What is Real Beauty". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 很多人认为外表美重要;
2. 有人说心灵美重要;
3. 你的看法。
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beauty of appearance,different attitudes to beauty, inner beauty, morality, Lei Feng , example, model of beauty, spirit, the beauty lying in one's heart , embodied in actions and deeds
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