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When talking to the "What is Real Beauty",different people had different points. Many people thought a extram beauty was more important like ones' face,dressing clothes and so on. As the saying goes:"Peoples' beauty was based on his dress,and the beauty was based on the costume." when you were walking in the street,seeing a beauty gilr,you would take your eyes to her constratly.
In the other hand,some people blieved that peoples'beauty was orgined in heart,which was influenced him forever.For example,people usually admired who had a kind heart,helping others in his effort. Liu Wei,who was an unable man,but he didin't give up his mind.He took a brave to facing the trouble,never give up.Finally,he won a success.When he song "you are beautiful",he made everyone moved. It was true that he was beautiful because of his hearts' beauty.
As for me,I thought it is same important to body beauty as well as heart beauty. Not only did the body beauty was good for us but also heart beauty was helpful to everyone.

[460912]What is Real Beauty?
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 You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "What is Real Beauty". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 很多人认为外表美重要;
2. 有人说心灵美重要;
3. 你的看法。
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beauty of appearance,different attitudes to beauty, inner beauty, morality, Lei Feng , example, model of beauty, spirit, the beauty lying in one's heart , embodied in actions and deeds
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