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What is Real Beauty
Nowaday,many beauty things have been found in our life.However,the queation of what is real beauty for a persent have cause a discussion.
Many people say that,the apperent beautiful is very important.They say nowaday people's life is become more faster,and the problem we meet is also become more.And if don't make sure that people see how heautiful you are, you are nothing.
However,there is still have some people who think the real beauty is depend with your heart. Kindness, willing to help,allways can see the good part,these are some thing can not esay to notice but is the real beauty.
I argee with the second.I think the real beauty is something that make people feel the world is so beautiful, and also feel happiness.And the only way to get that is have a beautiful,kindness heart.

[460912]What is Real Beauty?
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 You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "What is Real Beauty". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 很多人认为外表美重要;
2. 有人说心灵美重要;
3. 你的看法。
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beauty of appearance,different attitudes to beauty, inner beauty, morality, Lei Feng , example, model of beauty, spirit, the beauty lying in one's heart , embodied in actions and deeds
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