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There is a the friend in need is a friend indeed.There a different kind of friend around us,some of them only share happiness with you,some of them suffer with you,and other of them may help you when you in a hard situation.It's saod that a friend in need is a friend indeed.In my opinion,a friend who you can share happiness to and overcome the the difficulties together is a real friend.A real friend makes someone's life more colorful and meaningful.
I am really grateful to that life give me a big present,my close friend,which we knew abnout each other in my middle high school.According to these seven years ,i gragually know about what friendship is.She is a kind,smart and hard-working gril,what the most important thing i learn from her is to try to be myself and to be confident.What suprised me is that i realize we had become similiar to each other and some people even thought that we are twins.And in my high school the friendship of us even become the modle one to other people.
Some people may be puzzled that how to choose friends and how to estabilish a friendship.My opinion is to try to improve yourself and therefore,some people will be attractive to you,try to fifind some one you like and who has the good charecters that would influen you.what's more,you shoule be kind and positive and tolerant to your relationship.With the time goes by,you would find that your friendship bing you a lot.

[460720]Making Friends
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Making Friends". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 朋友对每个人都很重要;
2. 选择诚实、可靠和善良的朋友;
3. 如何维持友谊。
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friends,vital to people, help through difficulties and hardships, share joys, be careful to choose friends, good friends , helpful, bad friends, harmful, honest, reliable, kind, tolerant, mutual friends, sincere, prudent and considerate in making friends
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