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There are a lot of people believed that a beautiful apperance is very important. Of course they are right, those who have beautiful apperance may have more confidence than those who haven't. And as we all know, to be confidence is necessary in our life, it can makes us have a positive attitude toward the life.
On the other hands, some people said that inside-beauty also important to us.It is ture, it is completely impossible that everyone birth with a good apperance. But they also can be beauty if they have inside-beauty. Inside-beauty may can be found easily, but if you see it, you will appericiate it.
From where I am stand,inside-beauty is same important with beautiful apperance.If you have a good apperance but lack inside-beauty, it is not a real beauty. Maybe other people who does not know you before will appericiate your apperance, but they would stay you away when they know you lack inside-beauty. However,if you have inside-beauty and good apperance, it is real beauty.

[460912]What is Real Beauty?
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 You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "What is Real Beauty". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 很多人认为外表美重要;
2. 有人说心灵美重要;
3. 你的看法。
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beauty of appearance,different attitudes to beauty, inner beauty, morality, Lei Feng , example, model of beauty, spirit, the beauty lying in one's heart , embodied in actions and deeds
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