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What is Real Beauty?
Different people have different understandings on what is real beauty.None of them are unreasonable.
Some people believed that having a good appereance is necessary. Because a good-looking may deliver some notices to other people ,such as some kinds of your qualities , your habits ,your taste and so on. Before getting deeper aqcuctisions of you , people only can judge by your appereance . In other words , a good appereance will leave a impression when they first see you, also it will last for a long time .
Despite of a good-looking may have priorities in some areas ,lots of people instist that nothing is more essential than having a kind heart. Many people like to make friends with someone who is really nice .Even if you do not have a good-looking ,you still can gain confidence , real friendship and appriciate from other.
In my perspective, a nice heart will be more important .A kind heart will lead you to a correct way instead of doing the wrong things. A kind heart will help you realize who you are ,what you want and what you need to do, so that you won't lost yourself in the fancy world .Having a nice heart also can provide you much more strenthgh.

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 You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "What is Real Beauty". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 很多人认为外表美重要;
2. 有人说心灵美重要;
3. 你的看法。
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beauty of appearance,different attitudes to beauty, inner beauty, morality, Lei Feng , example, model of beauty, spirit, the beauty lying in one's heart , embodied in actions and deeds
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