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Making Friends
It is nacessary for everyone to make friends with others in the modern sociaty.In the one hand,we need to tell someone our sadness or happiness so as to relax ourselves.In the other hand,they may give us some advises as well as something intersting.Friends are so important in our life that they could help us when we are in a serious situation.
At the meantime,we should make friends who are creditable,relable and kind.A great friend will make a good influence in our study,life and career while some incredible friends may take some bad behaciors to us.It is terrible to make a mistke in thise choices.
Now, the question is coming.How can we get along with friends?It means that we should take something to keep our friendships forever.I think ,firstly,we should be warm and be willing to listen to them.Secondly ,if they are in trouble ,we must give a hand or courage to them .What's more ,friendship sould be kept by both of you ,and as long as you take your head in the friendship,it would'nt be broken.

[460720]Making Friends
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Making Friends". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 朋友对每个人都很重要;
2. 选择诚实、可靠和善良的朋友;
3. 如何维持友谊。
范文
friends,vital to people, help through difficulties and hardships, share joys, be careful to choose friends, good friends , helpful, bad friends, harmful, honest, reliable, kind, tolerant, mutual friends, sincere, prudent and considerate in making friends
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