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What is Real Beauty
What is real beauty?Many people ask frequantely.
Some of people thinking that the outlook is the most important thing of beauty.They agrued that it is a comment phenonment that many people get the first impression of "first looking".Just like the first meeting with boyfriend,the interview and so on.Almost people will get the "firse grade"of out lookand they think many people have gift for woking this work but because of outlook they will lose the opportunity.So,the think the outlook is improtant.
Others take strong objection of the most important thing is outlook,stating that the mose important thing of beauty heart beauty.They think that if someone are warm-hearted and dying to help others anyone will thinking their are beautiful.Just like the news about "The most beautiful monther""The most beautiful girl".Sometime they do not have beautiful looking ,however they have beautiful heart.
Personally speaking,i absoultely subcribe the latter.Thinking that althrough many people will have the "first looking"they do not like you if you have a dirty heart. On the contrary ,even if you are not beautiful you will be appreciate iff you have a beautiful heart .It is no exaggeration to said that if you have a beautiful heart you will be success sooner or latter.

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 You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "What is Real Beauty". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 很多人认为外表美重要;
2. 有人说心灵美重要;
3. 你的看法。
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beauty of appearance,different attitudes to beauty, inner beauty, morality, Lei Feng , example, model of beauty, spirit, the beauty lying in one's heart , embodied in actions and deeds
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