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My view on video games
Now,many childen were like it that playing video games.They are always play the video games all the day.
So afairded did i feel after know this fact.Because it will be bad for many childen on body and mind.On one hand,childen will get some problem in thier eyes if they play the video games all the day;they will feel tired.On the other hand,if childen always play the video games at home ,they maybe lack of some sport so that they will have some problem on thier health.Whatmore,play the video games will link to childen it that have some problem on thier mind ,because some video games have many power and sex.All in all ,play the video games all the days will be bad for childens mind and body.
When it comes to my suggestions on the problem ,I have a through that we should pay much attanion to the follow steps.On one hand ,we should try to tell childens it faces to faces that play many video games will be bad for thier body and mind .On the other hand ,we should make some activite to childen.Such as some sport like football ,basketball,swimming.In addition ,we should give some times to thierselvefs to try to get out the video games .All in all ,only in this way can we help childens get away the video games to the most.
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[460649]My View on Video Games
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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "My View on Video Games". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在很多孩子沉迷电子游戏;
2. 这对孩子的身体和心理都有影响;
3. 如何解决这个问题。
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vedio games, popular among students, addict to, bad influenc on health and psychology, violent games, harmful to children both physically and mentally, undesiralbe consequences, distinguish good or bad vedio games, limit screen time
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