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My view on Video Games
There is no doubt that there are many children who are addicted to the viedeo games. Accoding to this issue, many parents are very worried about their children's physical body and their mental mind,they not only one time to complain their children for they want to play viedo games rather than eatting something or do some exercises.
Whatsmore, the viedo games are filled with many violent and sexy which will do harm to children's mental mind, preventing them form how to judge the right thing in the real life.
On my opinion, it is suggested that teachers in school should lead children to go into the right way, which is mean that help them find more fun in study not in video games. In the meantime, it is nessary that parents should take more time to stay with their children.

[460649]My View on Video Games
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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "My View on Video Games". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在很多孩子沉迷电子游戏;
2. 这对孩子的身体和心理都有影响;
3. 如何解决这个问题。
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vedio games, popular among students, addict to, bad influenc on health and psychology, violent games, harmful to children both physically and mentally, undesiralbe consequences, distinguish good or bad vedio games, limit screen time
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