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My View on Video Games
Nowadays,more and more children pay more attention on video gamers,which affects their
body and mind.
In my opinion,play video games is benefit on children without waste too much time.Not only can it parctise our cooperation between hands and mind,but also it can make children relx.Parents is very improtent to manage their child about their time for play video games.
Parents should tell their child they must finsh their work what they should do at first.And
they can not play much time.
From what had been said about,manage childen is very importment.

[460649]My View on Video Games
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You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "My View on Video Games". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在很多孩子沉迷电子游戏;
2. 这对孩子的身体和心理都有影响;
3. 如何解决这个问题。
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vedio games, popular among students, addict to, bad influenc on health and psychology, violent games, harmful to children both physically and mentally, undesiralbe consequences, distinguish good or bad vedio games, limit screen time
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