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Nowdays, it is widely seen that crossing the street playing with the phone. Each of us know that it's a sort of dangerous bahavior, for which we may be killed by the car running fast. There might be some holes or barriers on the road. If we haven't paid enough attention to the road situation, we will easily suffered problems. What's more,it's also a bad hurt to our eyes to watch a phone when walking. According to the bad influences mentioned above, we ought to grt rid of such a bad habbit. Basically, we should manage ourselves strictly. We can also ask our friends for help to supervise each other not to touch the phone when crossing. In order to throughly avoid the bahavior, we can ask the government for help. If we may be paid for the bad bahavior, we may not bahavired it any longer.

[460641]Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone
要求
You are to write in 100-120 words on the topic "Crossing the Street While Playing with the Phone". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:   
1. 现在过马路玩手机的现象屡见不鲜;
2. 危害有哪些;
3. 有什么解决办法。
范文
increasing of using cellphone, crossing street, playing cellphone, exert negative influence on health, do bad to eyesight, cause traffic problems, less contact with people, refuse to use cellphone while crossing the streets, establish certain law, regulate bad behaviors
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